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10.29.2006, 09:22 PM
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10.29.2006, 09:23 PM
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i would like to hear anyones thoughts on this
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10.29.2006, 09:31 PM
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My thoughts would be like a clouded illusion...
Storm, storm, storm reigning on your parade, Run for shelter, hide and don't come out !! Crawl deeper into your hole, now....confidently.
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10.29.2006, 09:36 PM
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ooh. that's neat.
my name is in the first stanza!
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fuck i'm frustrated, freaking out something fierce, would you help me? i'm hungry and i stuffer and i startle, i struggle and i stammer til i'm up to my ears in miserable quote unquote "art" |
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10.29.2006, 09:36 PM
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yeah, i wrote it
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10.29.2006, 09:45 PM
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It's really very good. kit yourself with a head and a shortlist of what you're not going to take anymore shoulder blade a niche in rain walk adrift meld premonitions prevailing sanctity it's what they call a vision 'especially this.
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