Let's write a song, starting with lyrics - Page 3

EMMAh · 10.03.2006, 06:51 PM

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Originally Posted by Glice

You are, clearly, utterly insane.

Kiddiinnnnggggg, kiddiiiinnnnnggggg

Hip Priest · 10.03.2006, 06:53 PM

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Originally Posted by Danny Himself

I might record this tomorrow.

So far:

AHHHHHHHHHH, White Trash Woman!
works at dennys, all nighhhht long
smoke that meth all day, all night
white trash woman, hit that bong!
alright!
yeh woomon, grill mah hash browwwns
She's just a devil woman with evil on her mind
she gave me pancakes with motherfuckin pork rinds
this grand slam was meant to have ham

bitch, yeh!!

*guitar solo*

I drank the potion she offered me
I found myself on the floor
Then I looked into those big green eyes
And I wondered what I'd come there for
then i remembered
she's a filthy little whore
And I remembered
What a whore's for
But that whore's a bore;
I showed her the door.
but sheeee wanted more
so i hit her to the floor yeh

She got up and we started to dance
mmmmmmmmm, yeah, ohhhhhhh ahhhhh can you feeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeel it yeah yeah yeah yeah, mmm.
and i remember when she hit it all night long
And baby, that's why I'm singing this song
..and why I'm taking so long.
White trash woman, mow my lawwnnnn
and don't take long, baby, don't take too long
you look so hot in your furry thong
i wanna tap that all night long
There's a fete at the church
and I'm going along.
we had a shotgun wedding
god said it was wrong
but we know it was right
god can suck my dong

You love Satan, and I do tooo
you love it when i beat you
unless you are a jew!
Yeah you know it's true.

with a catholic block
cause white trash woomon
COMES IN THE NIIIGHT YEH
white trash woman
so wrong she's right

(let me know if I've missed anything)

Glice · 10.03.2006, 06:56 PM

A new chapter in outsider music is born.

Inhuman · 10.03.2006, 07:00 PM

Thanks hip priest, I was just getting the lines together myself when I noticed you had it all together! Cant wait to hear everyone's versions of it!

finding nobody · 10.03.2006, 07:32 PM

Im gonna have to record this one

noisemachine · 10.03.2006, 08:54 PM

should we come up with a melody and chords too?

hey alex · 10.03.2006, 08:56 PM

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Originally Posted by noisemachine

should we come up with a melody and chords too?

we should, i can try and contribute a bass line if this shit flies

Cantankerous · 10.03.2006, 09:00 PM

we should all record our own versions of it and post them.

finding nobody · 10.03.2006, 09:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Cantankerous

we should all record our own versions of it and post them.

great idea
I could do it bluesy or hard rocking or jandek style or rapping

SpectralJulianIsNotDead · 10.03.2006, 09:27 PM

yeah, definitely.

I just recorded a very Suicide version of it with my synth (I think I'm going to overdub some guitar before I post it though) , on Thursday, I'll do a hardcore version.

Then after people post their solo versions, perhaps someone can organize a collaborated version.

hey alex · 10.03.2006, 09:29 PM

sweet
i'll get working... either tonight or tomorrow. I try and write a song a day and this can be like one

got a very retarded rough take

finding nobody · 10.03.2006, 09:55 PM

I did a very, very rough take just now

http://download.yousendit.com/85B8C0A1504EDBA6
im not very happy with it at all. it sounds like eric clapton

SpectralJulianIsNotDead · 10.03.2006, 10:03 PM

I put it on my soundclick

www.soundclick.com/juliandunnsolostuff

Also up there are a bunch of stupid acoustic songs I wrote.

SpectralJulianIsNotDead · 10.03.2006, 10:11 PM

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Originally Posted by finding nobody

I did a very, very rough take just now

http://download.yousendit.com/85B8C0A1504EDBA6
im not very happy with it at all. it sounds like eric clapton

finding nobody · 10.03.2006, 10:16 PM

This is fun. Because the way I heard the song in my head is way different then the way you heard it in yours.
Yours sounds a little like nine inch nails. very nice

haha! i love the way you say hashbrowns

hey alex · 10.03.2006, 10:17 PM

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Originally Posted by finding nobody

I did a very, very rough take just now

http://download.yousendit.com/85B8C0A1504EDBA6
im not very happy with it at all. it sounds like eric clapton

nice playing... mine was just chords and atonalness

SpectralJulianIsNotDead · 10.03.2006, 10:19 PM

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Originally Posted by finding nobody

This is fun. Because the way I heard the song in my head is way different then the way you heard it in yours.
Yours sounds a little like nine inch nails. very nice

haha! i love the way you say hashbrowns

Well, the way I heard it in my head actually was more of an MC5 sort of thing, but I had my synth right here, and I've never recorded anything serious on the synth. I figured I'd do it with my synth.

My synth playing sucks though, my synth has a built in sequencer, that is where those 2 notes come from. So most of the time I'm not even playing.

That was the first time I ever beatboxed, haha

SpectralJulianIsNotDead · 10.04.2006, 08:25 PM

So, anyone gonna post their recordings? I want to hear a few more versions!

m^a(t)h · 10.04.2006, 08:40 PM

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Originally Posted by SpectralJulianIsNotDead

Well, the way I heard it in my head actually was more of an MC5 sort of thing, but I had my synth right here, and I've never recorded anything serious on the synth. I figured I'd do it with my synth.

My synth playing sucks though, my synth has a built in sequencer, that is where those 2 notes come from. So most of the time I'm not even playing.

That was the first time I ever beatboxed, haha

sounds great, play it on saturday!

honestly, it would be a good outro song for a cd...

SpectralJulianIsNotDead · 10.04.2006, 08:44 PM

So you are coming?

There are too many overdubs to do that song live. Someday I'll record and maybe play a bunch of synth stuff live when I have more time for a synth project.

The show on saturday is going to be crazy. There is huge animosity between the two bands I'm playing in (The Spectral Presence and Destroyer! and the Fiascos) There might be a fight.

And every band only gets to play 2 songs.

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Inhuman invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Montreal Posts: 5,807	Thanks hip priest, I was just getting the lines together myself when I noticed you had it all together! Cant wait to hear everyone's versions of it!
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finding nobody invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Florida Posts: 7,275	Im gonna have to record this one
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SpectralJulianIsNotDead invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 7,409	yeah, definitely. I just recorded a very Suicide version of it with my synth (I think I'm going to overdub some guitar before I post it though) , on Thursday, I'll do a hardcore version. Then after people post their solo versions, perhaps someone can organize a collaborated version.
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10.03.2006, 09:29 PM	#51
hey alex the end of the ugly Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 791	sweet i'll get working... either tonight or tomorrow. I try and write a song a day and this can be like one got a very retarded rough take __________________ Duran Duran's 1995 covers album Thank You was recently voted the worst album of all time by a Q magazine poll. Although we respectfully disagree (Sonic Youth's NYC Ghosts & Flowers is clearly the worst album of all time) -Pitchfork (hahahah!) Here's a myspace of my music and 4-track ramblings the electric kites--the jamz of me n my friends
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10.03.2006, 09:55 PM	#52
finding nobody invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Florida Posts: 7,275	I did a very, very rough take just now http://download.yousendit.com/85B8C0A1504EDBA6 im not very happy with it at all. it sounds like eric clapton
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10.03.2006, 10:03 PM	#53
SpectralJulianIsNotDead invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 7,409	I put it on my soundclick www.soundclick.com/juliandunnsolostuff Also up there are a bunch of stupid acoustic songs I wrote.
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10.03.2006, 10:16 PM	#55
finding nobody invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Florida Posts: 7,275	This is fun. Because the way I heard the song in my head is way different then the way you heard it in yours. Yours sounds a little like nine inch nails. very nice haha! i love the way you say hashbrowns
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10.04.2006, 08:25 PM	#58
SpectralJulianIsNotDead invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 7,409	So, anyone gonna post their recordings? I want to hear a few more versions!
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10.04.2006, 08:44 PM	#60
SpectralJulianIsNotDead invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 7,409	So you are coming? There are too many overdubs to do that song live. Someday I'll record and maybe play a bunch of synth stuff live when I have more time for a synth project. The show on saturday is going to be crazy. There is huge animosity between the two bands I'm playing in (The Spectral Presence and Destroyer! and the Fiascos) There might be a fight. And every band only gets to play 2 songs.
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