I'd like to share my poetry with you

shentov · 08.24.2008, 05:29 AM

but it's in Bulgarian.
sorry.

08.24.2008, 05:35 AM

but I like it!

MellySingsDoom · 08.24.2008, 05:42 AM

Can I compare thee to a frangrant rose
Or a beautiful creature dressed in the finest clothes?
Perhaps I'll aim my sights lowers; I recap:
You beauty is as filling as a doner kebab.

Mmm, kebab.......

shentov · 08.24.2008, 05:43 AM

kebab wins!

shentov · 08.24.2008, 05:44 AM

Градските улици
са бягаща пътека.
Аз търча като луд
и край мен
празни сгради,
институти,
кооперации-
всичко се върти
на кадър.
Аз хвърча
и не помръдвам.

Извеждам града
на разходка
(с каишка).

Градските улици
са бягащи пътеки.

MellySingsDoom · 08.24.2008, 05:46 AM

I don't understand a word of that, but I love Cyrillic writing, so as visual poetry, it rocks. This needs rep, and fast!

shentov · 08.24.2008, 05:50 AM

MellySingsDoom · 08.24.2008, 05:53 AM

How now, brown Bureaucrat!
Writing in the sea of desire
Of Haight-Ashbury in the
SUMMER of our.....youth
Ornette Coleman on the stereo, whilst a
beatnik clicks his fingers
to the...BEAT
CLICK CLACK! CLICK CLACK!
Goes the snare
Cool scene, endless mary jane dreams
My love comes from Nirvana
Or is it Portland?
Beatnik jive, high-five
MAN! I got
the
munchies
NEED a plate
OF HAM AND eggs.

shentov · 08.24.2008, 05:55 AM

man, that's really cool!

MellySingsDoom · 08.24.2008, 05:55 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shentov

(с каишка).

Hey I know this - it's "Hey, Cantanky" isn't it?

MellySingsDoom · 08.24.2008, 05:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by shentov

man, that's really cool!

Read it in the style of Allen Ginsberg, and it really jives-out, daddy-o

shentov · 08.24.2008, 05:57 AM

I could try and translate this if you tell me sth. Whats the word for those things on the gym where you run. I mean you run ON them. Like running... somethings...
got it?

MellySingsDoom · 08.24.2008, 05:57 AM

Oh, a treadmill?

shentov · 08.24.2008, 05:58 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MellySingsDoom

Hey I know this - it's "Hey, Cantanky" isn't it?

means "on a leash".

shentov · 08.24.2008, 05:58 AM

whats a treadmill?

MellySingsDoom · 08.24.2008, 05:59 AM

Treadmill - running thingy used in gyms.

shentov · 08.24.2008, 06:53 AM

lol-ities
gimme a minute to translate it okay

to the sound of big black whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarghhh

shentov · 08.24.2008, 07:04 AM

No movement

The city streets
are a treadmill.
I run like mad
Empty buildings
around me
Institutes
Cooperations-
everything whirls
on a sequence
I’m flying
and not moving

I’m taking the city out on a leash
on a walk

the city streets
are a treadmill

MellySingsDoom · 08.24.2008, 07:06 AM

Hey, that's good, shentov!

shentov · 08.24.2008, 07:13 AM

sounds right in English?!?

08.24.2008, 05:29 AM	#1
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	but it's in Bulgarian. sorry. __________________
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08.24.2008, 05:35 AM	#2
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08.24.2008, 05:42 AM	#3
MellySingsDoom invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 8,662	Can I compare thee to a frangrant rose Or a beautiful creature dressed in the finest clothes? Perhaps I'll aim my sights lowers; I recap: You beauty is as filling as a doner kebab. Mmm, kebab....... __________________ Snow on Easter Sunday - Jesus Christ in reverse.
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08.24.2008, 05:44 AM	#5
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	Градските улици са бягаща пътека. Аз търча като луд и край мен празни сгради, институти, кооперации- всичко се върти на кадър. Аз хвърча и не помръдвам. Извеждам града на разходка (с каишка). Градските улици са бягащи пътеки. __________________
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08.24.2008, 05:46 AM	#6
MellySingsDoom invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 8,662	I don't understand a word of that, but I love Cyrillic writing, so as visual poetry, it rocks. This needs rep, and fast! __________________ Snow on Easter Sunday - Jesus Christ in reverse.
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08.24.2008, 05:50 AM	#7
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	haha __________________
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08.24.2008, 05:53 AM	#8
MellySingsDoom invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 8,662	How now, brown Bureaucrat! Writing in the sea of desire Of Haight-Ashbury in the SUMMER of our.....youth Ornette Coleman on the stereo, whilst a beatnik clicks his fingers to the...BEAT CLICK CLACK! CLICK CLACK! Goes the snare Cool scene, endless mary jane dreams My love comes from Nirvana Or is it Portland? Beatnik jive, high-five MAN! I got the munchies NEED a plate OF HAM AND eggs. __________________ Snow on Easter Sunday - Jesus Christ in reverse.
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shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	man, that's really cool! __________________
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08.24.2008, 05:57 AM	#12
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	I could try and translate this if you tell me sth. Whats the word for those things on the gym where you run. I mean you run ON them. Like running... somethings... got it? __________________
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MellySingsDoom invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 8,662	Oh, a treadmill? __________________ Snow on Easter Sunday - Jesus Christ in reverse.
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shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	whats a treadmill? __________________
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08.24.2008, 05:59 AM	#16
MellySingsDoom invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 8,662	Treadmill - running thingy used in gyms. __________________ Snow on Easter Sunday - Jesus Christ in reverse.
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08.24.2008, 06:53 AM	#17
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	lol-ities gimme a minute to translate it okay to the sound of big black whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarghhh __________________
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08.24.2008, 07:04 AM	#18
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	No movement The city streets are a treadmill. I run like mad Empty buildings around me Institutes Cooperations- everything whirls on a sequence I’m flying and not moving I’m taking the city out on a leash on a walk the city streets are a treadmill __________________
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MellySingsDoom invito al cielo Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 8,662	Hey, that's good, shentov! __________________ Snow on Easter Sunday - Jesus Christ in reverse.
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08.24.2008, 07:13 AM	#20
shentov expwy. to yr skull Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Bulgaria Posts: 1,223	sounds right in English?!? __________________
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