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Old 03.27.2006, 08:22 PM   #4
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Hmmmmm.......have dynamic characters, make the unexpected happen, and most importantly SHOW, DON'T TELL. Let yr characters actions/expressions/dialogue do the the talking....ie don't write "Bill was really happy because of X."
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