[krastian]

Hey man.....I have an English Degree with a minor in Creative Writing Fiction. Post any questions you have and I'll try to give you some advice....I don't know as much about a "graphic novel" as say traditional fiction/short stories, but I'll try. So far it looks like you are starting to really flesh things out and put together the "world" you are trying to create......fleshing these things out is a great start and much of the work will already be done since you did this stuff in advance.