"Pervasive" can go, and I see your point haha. It is better without it. It's a bit redundant to use that word along with "far too often."
"Chintzy" stays though. It's far more descriptive and apt than "cheap."
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Good try at using big words...
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Fuck you, fucking wannabe.
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...and perhaps replace them with something more appropriate, if anything at all.
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What? ...and use "bad", "terrible", "horrendous" or "horrible" instead?
You've got to have an adjective in front of "quality" or else the sentence assumes that the reader can figure it out based on context. Pick a modifier in your infinite wisdom, please. Oh yeah, and stop getting cunty with me.