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Old 07.26.2010, 05:33 AM   #16
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Originally Posted by Glice
That last sentence is syntactically very strained. I'd recommend a comma after the 'you', and an ellipsis at the end. Without that, the 'comedy' is just lost...

And of course you're being ironic. No-one could possibly think Clarkson is anything other than a prize cunt.

You're a cunt. Now shut up.
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