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Originally Posted by SynthethicalY

yeah it does have that, "it could be a chapter" feeling.

yes man, keep going. it does read like a dream in the sense that one thing happens then another, like in dreams. good inspiration for characters, see. keep all your notes etc and by the way do you have a dream notebook? you know a pad by your side of the bed where you write down what you can remember from the night before. very useful shit.