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Old 09.06.2018, 11:01 AM   #5245
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Originally Posted by tw2113
I hope I don't sound dismissive.


oh, i just added my explanation because it needed explaining. sometimes people do give arbitrary rules of writing. im not a hipster though and just wanted to clarify why i made those suggestions. style is functional.


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Originally Posted by tw2113
That said, everything except the coffee shop satire/onion-style piece was written back in like 2011 or earlier, so definitely a lot of amateur mistakes made that would hopefully be evolved from since. Now to just start something new. /me kicks himself in the butt

i found humor in every piece so i’d say get to work yeah
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