It's interesting how you've both taken utterly distinct paths with it. I think yours, Mr Shabbray, probably sounds most like it needs 'something' - not to say what you've done isn't good, but that it feels a bit skeletal at the moment (which was hopefully the idea). Herr Deaths' work might be a bit more tricky to work with, as it sounds very close to being a 'finished' work to me (but what would I know etc?)
But yeah, good work both. Someone else's turn now.
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