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Initial reading: "18,000 people" or "eighteen-thousand"; "Consisting mostly of blocks of flats, the majority of which were built..."; "...here in search of work and, as a result, the population..."; "If the authorities had done something in order to develop cultural and sports venues, this town...".
But generally these are more stylistic changes than grammatical ones. I'll check back later with my thorough proof-reading hat on. You don't have anything major to worry about, I know plenty of native-English speakers who don't write half as well as you.
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Originally Posted by Savage Clone
Last time I was in Chicago I spent an hour in a Nazi submarine with a banjo player.
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