Thread: Girl In A Band: A Memoir
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Old 02.20.2015, 01:15 AM   #165
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dammit, i love her prose. by this i don't mean her syntax or choice of words (but there are some great words there). i mean mostly how she connects one idea with the next one & the next one-- the way her mind associates. also the way her story moves around time-- starts at the end, goes back at the beginning, jumps back to the far past, then the middle, etc.

as much as i've enjoyed reading these 30 or so pages, i hope you don't end up ripping/posting the whole book.
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