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Originally Posted by tw2113
I'm definitely not disregarding any of the advice, so I hope I don't sound dismissive.
That said, everything except the coffee shop satire/onion-style piece was written back in like 2011 or earlier, so definitely a lot of amateur mistakes made that would hopefully be evolved from since. Now to just start something new. /me kicks himself in the butt
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Are we critiquing writing here? Did I miss something? I kinda want in.