Originally Posted by Genteel Death
The disgusted, deeply offended son of a society intent on wasting its true potential on internet forums and social-networking websites, Jonboy couldn't bear the thought of his inner demons not being paid enough attention to anymore, so he took his own life on a cold Canadian morning.
The internet community is said to be feeling totally indifferent after hearing the news, with one comment on the forum of notorious noisemakers Sonic Youth pointing out that ‘’Dude, life ends and stuff’’. The name of the comment’s author has been identified as divorcée, father of one Mr gmku, the original founder of the Rolling Stones fan club, now said to be in deep emotional pain caused by the gradual loss of all his hair and lowering of the testicles due to old age.
Jonboy leaves behind his wife and family. And maybe someone else too.
hhmm not bad but here is where you go wrong time and again, less is more. posting things like that although slightly humerous makes you look over zealous and a needy internet forum geek all the more. if you had left it a few posts back it would have been less preachy. remember: less is more.