Thread: Another new episode of my sitcom!
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Old 07.07.2012, 03:53 PM   #6
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good , some parts could be faster, the stand ups can be better prepared, that it does not looks like you are improvising at the moment
so it would miss it's effect
and some more video effects accenting the jokes
would make the jokes better
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