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Old 06.22.2015, 09:17 AM   #39083
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from what i'm reading i think you can retain your speed but just avoid all the beating around the bush.

-"what do you think?"
-"it's shit and it won't work"

or

-"what do you think?"
-"i'll do it but i need a raise"

ha ha ha

srsly if you must keep them waiting then deliver the goods upfront. no preface.

much like the rules of journalistic writing no? headline first, main stuff next, details later

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