from what i'm reading i think you can retain your speed but just avoid all the beating around the bush.
-"what do you think?"
-"it's shit and it won't work"
or
-"what do you think?"
-"i'll do it but i need a raise"
ha ha ha
srsly if you must keep them waiting then deliver the goods upfront. no preface.
much like the rules of journalistic writing no? headline first, main stuff next, details later
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GMKU: SPEAKING IN HEADLINES SINCE 2015
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