[gmku]

This is so fake. The handwritten comments look like the handwriting of a 6th-grader. And the teacher's remarks are totally un-teacher-like, unless we're talking P.E. or Driver's Ed teacher. "creative flair for writing..." So cliched. And the critiques are not the articulate comments you'd expect from an English teacher, even at the high school level. A true English teacher, if this bothered him or her, would be decidely more snide in his/her commentary to match the student's snide undertaking of a porn review. At least the smart teacher would do so, to show the student that the student is not getting the upper hand. Like the comment above, "A 'touching' analysis but doesn't 'penetrate' the subject." And, "Don't see me. Just do it over, or accept an F."