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Old 03.23.2021, 10:46 PM   #24896
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idk what to tell you about this vs the "directors" but in previous versions there were plot gaps that made things confusing for me.

zora's scene here seems longer? (but i can't tell longer than which one). but it all meshes perfectly: there is exposition, there is foreshadowing, there is repetition, there is clarity. everything is just right in the narrative.

and yeah deckard gets picked up from the street, he just "appears" there, which is the whole point that we don't really "know" where he comes from.
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