If you've got a few minutes spare..comments or reviews would be greatly apreciated
 

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Any comments or reviews would be greatly appreciated.

pretty good. Recorded today?

yea a couple of hours ago. I haven't written any songs for a couple of months. just a early version of the song. that was recorded 30 mins after i had written it. cheers for listening dude :-)

well it sounds pretty good. I really want to write some songs. It's been so long since I wrote a "song".

It's better not to force it. I never sit down and say "right i'm gonna write a song". i just do what i normally do which is just play any chord progression and if i feel some lyrics creep in my head for a verse then i take it from there. Sometimes i can't find a chorus that sounds good and so i just leave it. You have to try and make it natural and not force it.