just designed a flyer for my upcoming party
 

advice/tips/etc.
what do y'all think?

i've seen worst...

i'll be there.

its $150 presale / $200 at the door
might wanna get on it and get your invite now

p.s. is it really bad?

Nice Crypto! I like the vivid colors, it suits the poster well.

A few things:
-if you can make the "Life's a beach text" less bold/black (if you can) it would be easier to read
-in the 2nd part, the center aligned tect at bottom could be a little smaller, and aligned right to maintain balance!

Other than that, it looks great! Well done

Dunno, I'd say that the main font is a bit unclear ( cs are too similar to es) but that's not a big problem ( I mean, if you read it you obviously read it correctly). It doesn't look bad, it gives the idea of a beach party. maybe it's a bit 80's style, but again, that's not a bad thing.
Do all the playmates get paid the same amount of money or there's a "superstar" among them?

thanks, im on it.
someone mentioned the hair
said it was messy and didnt flow well with the rest
should i smoothen it out or is it not that big of a deal?

and thanks.

tailor gets paid a bit more

man, how rich are you?

No prob! I didn't notice the hair at first sight, but now that I notice it, it would be great if you fill it in with the regular orange color you're using, keeping the semitransparent palm tree :)

not red?

i am really suprised your having a party and will post the pics on here because we are all so interested in seeing pictures of you with a bottle hugging people. you never did anything like this before. why exactly do you like sonic youth?

Is the party being held in a hospital by the beach?

omghi2u

no, but that'd be awesome

What's the theme?Cancer?

and alcohol poisoning

Alcohol posing?Oh i see.....

harhar

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dude, if you seriously do it
you can stay here
we'll party for a week and have a blast
i know all the hot spots

it looks kinda cheap

hi, crypto! it looks cool but there is one thing that doesn't fit in there - the font and colour of the font on that guest card pics..

Isn't the phrase "Life's a Beach" getting a little hackneyed by now?

so what exactly happens at these parties that makes it worth paying $200 to attend?

I hope yr kidding.

hahaha

i've been checking the playboy pages 78 to 89, and i'll be there man...
at least spiritually.

HEY! that wasn't a joke!

"You call that a party?"

oh, I meant the regular orange color of the girl for the hair. The red of the palm tree should stay. Sorry for the ambiguity :)

fixed version

Does Chamillitary have anything to do with Chamillionnaire?

This poster would keep me the fuck away, and that probably means it's doing its job ;)

yeah hes chamillionares dj

It might as well be.

i second jon's question: why exactly do you like sonic youth?

and, more importantly: do you really think you really like sonic youth?

the fixed version looks much better....

What exactly is "Senior Mens"?

indeed

both questions are irrelevant

what do you think?

according to my last fm...
Overall Top Artists


1 Sonic Youth 4,501


2 The Velvet Underground 3,355


3 Ween 3,334


4 Pink Floyd 2,819


5 Beck 2,641


6 Radiohead 2,071


7 Bob Dylan

 

1,545


8 Elliott Smith 1,123


9 Kings of Leon 1,086


10 The Brian Jonestown Massacre 1,045


11 My Morning Jacket 1,005


12 Joy Division 913


13 !!! 771


14 The Flaming Lips 729

they are the most generic posters ever