yeah, SY quotes have become part of me on every level. not only in poetry, y'know.
so they're any good? the English sounds 'correct'?

I'm not much of a poem critic so I dunno. They were pleasant and easy reads, and yes the English sounded correct.

i just heard a song on a college radio station with these exact lyrics. the song is amazing and this is the only place i can find the lyrics on the internet. do you know the name of this band? if so please email me at zonie44@yahoo.com, thank you. the singer is female and there is a sounbd of a typewrite in the backkground, and the song is twent or so minutes long

what is this song? i've heard this!!

What lyrics you talking about?

ehm, someone stole my lyrics and made a song... that goes on some radio...
zonie44 you sound diesel to me...
and yeah...
What lyrics you talking about?

someone keeps erasing my posts

anyway it's the lyrics that atsonicpark posted, starts like this

Old tempest up again
And none within my darkened eyes
Has dreaming spun you round bout the head you are escaping with
Is it too far
The scenery goes
Always alone when shaped like this
The heart is heaven-hued
Hiding in the seam of solar systems embracing
All spaces leaning into to get a scent of you
It's dangerous outside as well as in
Imagined for the chosen few
Confused as well as clarified
Unknown, a pixel in your tv screen
Give me truth and I'll show how you lie
Give me lies and I'll know yourself

ah, jeebus, i really thought someone taken my lyrics, not that I really got mad or something, just uber inqisitive...

you have to ask atsonicpark, has to be his band.
or else.

Shentov, yr poetry is awesome! But your written language is so strangely beautiful that I had to comment on that also.
...do you have more poetry to share with us?

языка—властитель Поэзия
гений высекает чудо камня Из
легка речь если сердце Теплеет
речений красота ласкает слух И

Sal. is the best writer on SYG.